"Unrevealed"

Okay, so I started writing a poem in the shower, and then when I got out started writing. From the time I started writing in the shower to now, wow has this poem developed into something I really like a lot.

It is based off of thoughts of the view of the river from my apartment. Whenever I go down there I get lost and wrapped up in the whole thinking thing, it is a great place to go and get away from the world.

So here is the poem, hope you enjoy!

"Unrevealed"

This place so unrevealed

It captures my senses

As if no outside world exists

Somehow the day disappears

All known is thoughts racing

Through my mind like a flash encounter

Could I stand here alone?

Here alone for the rest of eternity?

If that were to be my destiny

Would these thoughts be endless?

Endless eternity what a long time

But what is time but endless?

This place is but an illusion

Illusion of space and ideals

With which I base the world

Right now at this moment

If the world were this ideal

My ideal of unseen beauty

Then I could live here

The place unrevealed

Tory Gallery

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